OBSERVATION YOUR ORAL PRESENTATION

The resources did I use is an a powerpoint about the my oral presentation. I didn't look at the audience because I look at the camera. Sometimes I read my notes because I forgive the text. I do gestures to hold the attention fo your audience. In the oral presentation I organize the ideas in order of importance. I think I intruduce interesting and new information to the audience. I look up the information in the internet. I check my grammar and use a bit rich vocabulary and I sometimes use the sentence linkers. I also use fillers for example well, you know...
I think my pronunciation it's good but I'm very nervous and sometimes my pronunciation it's not good and I'm not very explain correctly.
The mark did I get is a 6.